Its aint so bad as first sig, but first of all I dont like effects :/ that purple color not compare with render/stock. Text not compares to signature too. Thats basic mistakes on this signature. I hope I helped you a little
Calm down on the Blur, it's pretty decent for a first try.
Don't use that text for the name, it ruins it, try and create your own, make it look more eye catching.
thx i didnt spend any time on the text cause i was kind of just playing around with the warp tool thanks for the criticism everyone ill try to go easy on the blurring tool
if you had of read i said dont worry about th text cause i put it in in like 5 seconds just so my name would be there and the circle is from the stock photo...