The C4D was only there to draw your eyes to the focal, not to look cool or what not.
The problem is that the C4D is so sharp that it draws just as much focus as the focal point.
It's only there to help create depth.You need to add some effects to the background, just looks like a copy and paste picture in the background.
Alright, thanks very much for your criticism, I'll be sure to keep it in mind if I ever make a sig of this style again.The problem is that the C4D is so sharp that it draws just as much focus as the focal point.

