My Graphics through the week's progression | Criticism appreciated

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My Graphics through the week's progression | Criticism appreciated
  1. Unread #21 - Jun 20, 2013 at 1:12 PM
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    the name un balances it scoot the charter over to the left some. try to blend him in to the background some more he looks like he is standing in time warp.
     
  3. Unread #22 - Jun 21, 2013 at 1:43 PM
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    The name's pretty hard to read. and its super busy; but that seems to be what youre going for... I'm more of a fan of clean layouts. idk, this style just seems used to death.
     
  5. Unread #23 - Jun 21, 2013 at 7:59 PM
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    Made a sig using some c4d for a change

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  7. Unread #24 - Jun 22, 2013 at 1:07 AM
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    It's not legible and it doesn't blend with the background. C4d text isn't used for tags FYI, it's more for shop signatures where people have buttons, etc.
     
  9. Unread #25 - Jun 22, 2013 at 10:31 AM
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    Here's another one I just made.
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    I'm just more focused on practicing the techniques, Jack, but at this point I'm not too focused on actually using them for my signature. =D
     
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    This one is a huge improvement from the OP!

    I'd use something like that then publish it for web and devices so it's all nice and clean.
     
  13. Unread #27 - Jun 23, 2013 at 4:15 PM
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    Made a random sig-sized banner.

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    Made a new sig

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  17. Unread #29 - Jun 24, 2013 at 11:47 PM
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    Here's a banner I made for my sister.

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  19. Unread #30 - Jun 25, 2013 at 5:35 AM
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    thats getting better but still looks a bit cluderd/ messy and i thank you should of made the top of here hair darker blue like the bottom of her hair, so it dident blend in to the sky as much.
     
  21. Unread #31 - Jun 25, 2013 at 9:06 AM
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    Here's the edit with Bigk's advice

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  23. Unread #32 - Jun 26, 2013 at 1:22 AM
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    i like seven and three.
     
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