the name un balances it scoot the charter over to the left some. try to blend him in to the background some more he looks like he is standing in time warp.
The name's pretty hard to read. and its super busy; but that seems to be what youre going for... I'm more of a fan of clean layouts. idk, this style just seems used to death.
It's not legible and it doesn't blend with the background. C4d text isn't used for tags FYI, it's more for shop signatures where people have buttons, etc.
thats getting better but still looks a bit cluderd/ messy and i thank you should of made the top of here hair darker blue like the bottom of her hair, so it dident blend in to the sky as much.