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  1. KirkKnight

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    KirkKnight, Dec 7, 2013
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    My first song check it out
    bump!
     
    KirkKnight, Dec 8, 2013
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    My first song check it out
    It's pretty good for your first song you still got some work to do obviously but i would say for your first one you are on the right track.
     
    zootederrday, Dec 10, 2013
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    Honestly was horrible, sorry.
     
    Ow 3 Hit, Dec 12, 2013
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    Sorry.
     
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    Nice intro, but i feel bad because the rapping was shitty, you need to think about the words you use, like the opening line "this worlds so fucked up, everywhere you go everyone's drugged up" its not expressive i think is the word of the person you are.
     
    MKM, Dec 23, 2013
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