My first sig CnC please

[flameguitarcody]

First before anyone says it I know the "render" is bad I just wanted to have a sig fully made by me so I drew out the "render" in paint and then made the background tell me what you think.

 

[Lukef555]

Not terrible for a first try, i like the smudge/glow thing on the rener, the text is awful to be honest. Its a weird size but the background isnt bad, although it doesnt fit the render.

Overall not bad for a first sig; 7/10.

Just work on text and fitting the BG to the render on this one and fix the size.

 

[flameguitarcody]

Not terrible for a first try, i like the smudge/glow thing on the rener, the text is awful to be honest. Its a weird size but the background isnt bad, although it doesnt fit the render.

Overall not bad for a first sig; 7/10.

Just work on text and fitting the BG to the render on this one and fix the size.

Alright I'll definitely work on that thank you.

 

[wombakage]

Erm backround is kinda weird
The text is unappealing. . I just don't like the colour scheme
And the green thing on his hand :X

otherwise i love the effort

 

[Lukef555]

Yeah now that i see it the green thing is kinda out of place.

 

[flameguitarcody]

Yeah now that i see it the green thing is kinda out of place.

Yeah the image\render was made in Ms-paint and that was my attempt to create his cero [attack] that he is in the anime\manga it was a pretty failed attempt but I couldn't get rid of it lol I re-did some of it and fixed a couple things let me know what you think now.

 

[Lukef555]

The background still needs work, the lens flare in the hand should be dimmer down and the one in the background is to visible, use a different MM for the BG one, you still need text work, try reading some tutorials.