My first quick freestyle...

[gonjabi]

Wassup Sythe world, my name is Gonjabi AKA Darkwin i signed up on this forum long ago so i don't go by that name for awhile. Anyways here's a quick freestyle nothing major just messing around, im hoping to improve my flow and mixing skills very soon!!

Thanks for checking me out!!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uq0YWosTdBk[/YOUTUBE]
If it doesn't load heres the direct link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uq0YWosTdBk

 

[Egu]

You actually sounded very professional, and the lyrics weren't bad either. Do you have any tips to freestyling? And rapping in general?

 

[sm321]

I have embeded the video for everyone

[youtube]uq0YWosTdBk[/youtube]

The rap itself was ok, but there wasn't any chorus (I'm guessing that's because it was only short?).

 

[They be trippin]

Solid beat man. Flows pretty smooth.

 

[Magic Arrow]

Awesome. What did you use to record it.

 

[Listen to Young Money]

NY style beat, consistent flow, I like it. Make more, I'm sure we'd like to hear them.

 

[yonkers]

Awesome. What did you use to record it.

it was done in a studio. i can tell by the quality of it.

 

[gonjabi]

I've done numerous songs one of them being "1337 Haxxor" it was suppose to be a comedy track etc. but somehow it landed on iTunes xD
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ieJtn73e1w&feature=results_main&playnext=1&list=PL3E717AA0C34CA111

Thanks everyone for the constructive feedback!

@Egu all i can say about 'Freestyling' is find your own flow what you think you believe best fits you, be creative with words and metaphors/similies try doing something different. Im no expert so thats just my POV.

@yonkers & Magic Arrow i just used Mixcraft v5 and Waves Diamond Bundle for FX.

Thanks again!! Enjoy...

 

[Spraynwipe]

Very cool, great quality recording and good rhymes. Loving your 1337 haxor one too, hope you've made some nice dough from that on itunes :3

 

[Al bundy king]

Love it, great flow. Awsome beat too btw