My First Pixel art

[geio]

All made in MS Paint. Just had a try .
feel free to say what's wrong.

 

[mike_w_99]

Its a little to shakey, like your hand was shaking when u were doing the lines. The tree looks like its growing out of the g, the flames could be a bit better, the tree stump doesnt need the strip of orange, the beems from the sun are to orangey. if you made it more realistic colours, i think it would look alot better. and smoothen out the black lines on the grass, and theres a black outline to nothhing

 

[geio]

Its a little to shakey, like your hand was shaking when u were doing the lines. The tree looks like its growing out of the g, the flames could be a bit better, the tree stump doesnt need the strip of orange, the beems from the sun are to orangey. if you made it more realistic colours, i think it would look alot better. and smoothen out the black lines on the grass, and theres a black outline to nothhing

Wow, that was what i was waiting for , thanks anyways, it was just an quicky, so i didnt put my best into this picture . And anyway, the tree is growing out of the g , that was what i ment.

 

[Clank]

You have potential, thats VERY nice for a first try. Keep us updated w/ more

 

[geio]

You have potential, thats VERY nice for a first try. Keep us updated w/ more

Thanks. I put more time for pixel art now .