• Log in or sign up for an account here: https://www.sythe.org/login

My First Legit Tag // Venom

DeFyGFX

DeFyGFX

Forum Addict

Banned
Joined
Jun 30, 2012
Sythe Gold
0
Messages
364
Hey guys
I just made this new tag and wanted to see what you guys thought of it and some CnC ! :D
Thanks to Nero for giving me some tips.

One thing I must say... Nero, come at me bro :P

venomy.png


After some of the CnC, I edited the tag and produced this.
I tried to add some depth by blurring a the parts of venom that would be slightly away from you but also away from the focal point. I don't know if thats what your meant to do lol but it looked like depth to me :P Also I added a fractal and duplicated it a couple of times and positioned them. Then I just turned their opacity down. I also darkened the area around the arm so that it is less bright and doesn't attract you as much as before. I also messed around with a gradient and edited the curves.

venomsj.png


This time, I i blurred the render a bit, and darkened the arm a bit. Also I made his mouth slightly brighter. I also added 2 of the same fractal.

venomz.png
 
JetFlix said:
It's way too sharp on the render (Upper right hand corner), to the point of it being pixelated. I'm also drawn too much to the right arm, almost like there is some sort of stroke on it.
Click to expand...

Tyvm for the cnc

Don't take this as me trying to argue but...
I thought the render looked kinda cooled being sharpened this much lol
But yes I agree with being drawn to the arm :S But I don't know what you mean by stroke on it lol :D
I'm going to try fix some stuff and repost it.

tyvm for the cnc :D
 
Battleship Champion
Heidy
In Memory of Jon
Paper Trading Competition Participant
If it is your first one, then you did a pretty good job. Try and make it so that when someone looks at it they are drawn into the focal. So basically work a lot on shading.
 
Simaas said:
Overcontrasted.
Click to expand...

Ok I don't know much really how that happened, I didn't mess with contrast one bit but ty for cnc.

MoonGlare said:
If it is your first one, then you did a pretty good job. Try and make it so that when someone looks at it they are drawn into the focal. So basically work a lot on shading.
Click to expand...

Ty :D
so by shading, i have to darken some areas a bit more? almost to be like a spot light on the focal?
ty for cnc
 
First one looks ace, even though the upper arms abit bright it looks very sicks till and do you accept rsgp for any graphics? i'd love to have one made up for myself ill pay well if needed :)
 
Nice, not my type of signature though. I like the ones with big writing, and small pictures.
 
I really like it buddy. I think the right arm in the Original render was way too bright anyway, so you've done a good job to get it to the stage on the last one.

Nice work nonetheless :)
 
Ashaxx said:
I really like it buddy. I think the right arm in the Original render was way too bright anyway, so you've done a good job to get it to the stage on the last one.

Nice work nonetheless :)
Click to expand...

tyvm mate ! I really appreciate your comment :D
 
I like the first one the most, the text stands out more which makes the whole thing look better.
 
You must log in or register to reply here.
Runescape Gamblingrunescape gambling
Back
Top