My first C4D+Photoshop combo design

[Corruptx]

Never used cinema before in my life, downloaded it, watched a few tutorials and just ran with it to see what I could create. This was the outcome, can't wait to really start abusing this software.

 

Pretty good start ^-^ I don't know much about graphics, but it at least looks visually appealing. Not too big of a fan of the weird fire stuff at the bottom of the letters (not the background glare thing, that looks fine).

 

[Tyler]

Keep the text solid and add a layer of fire overtop.

When you learn how to layer a pattern inside of the text it'll look much better


Also it looks a bit blank other than the text.

 

[Porge]

Yeah Cinema 4D is a good program to have; where did you download it from?
Also yeah it looks nice and simple but simplicity is good,
I would change the colour of the fire in the text so it doesn't clash as much though.

 

[Ronaldo7]

Looks really good for a 1st timer! keep it up lad.

 

Looks good as a start, watch some videos on youtube for some advanced tips and tricks.

 

[Black Widow]

Looks kind of pixelated to me, but other than that i like the concept.

 

[Corruptx]

Thanks for the feedback guys, appreciate it!

 

[Maker]

Looks nice.
I like.

 

[Santermans]

Looks really good, make me one of those