My best yet? :)

[ReFLeXisLEGiT]

stock

after I made it sexy.

hate it, rate it, just don't rape it ​

 

[Kiabin]

Lol. I'm listening to bmth as I saw this. The effects are scattered. Not a complete focal, really.

 

[ReFLeXisLEGiT]

oli sykes is my bestfriend in real life
uhh can you tell whats wrapping around him?

 

Colour is really LQ and distorted. Try saving as .PNG instead of a .GIF

 

[ReFLeXisLEGiT]

Colour is really LQ and distorted. Try saving as .PNG instead of a .GIF

I changed some stuff lighting and effects
to make it clearer
and changed to .PNG like it?​

 

[AAMagenta]

Looks pretty good!

 

The colour quality is still really distored. I can't tell if it's deliberate or not though

 

[Spraynwipe]

Overall the first thing I notice is the poor blending of the effects with the guy on the bottom left (under his arm), feels like there's a shadow or something conflicting with the effects. The colours are a bit boring, and I think it could use more depth and better lighting.