Advice on this?

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Looks really cool, if there's any critism I have to give it would be the background behind the text. 3D text looks cool but whatever is behind it might make it look worse in this case.

 

If you see my khaini one it looks alot better...

 

i think adding in some shadows would make it look way more atmospheric, looks flat. Besides that it looks good.

 

What @Lvl 75 Def said, and also clean up the soft brushes along the edges, pretty visible still Good job man

 

It lacks depth, because of the green lighting.
Like @Lvl 75 Def said, you need to add in some shadows at the right places.
A little bit of colouring too since the colour is dull and too monotone.
Quick example of changes:

 

want the psd so you can have a look?

 

Yeah sure.