My 3rd attempt

I just don't like how many colours you've used there. It throws my eyes off the focal a little. Also, the text is not well placed. I advise you never to just throw your text into one corner, but to simply place it somewhere near your focal.

 

[Rawr]

I just don't like how many colours you've used there. It throws my eyes off the focal a little. Also, the text is not well placed. I advise you never to just throw your text into one corner, but to simply place it somewhere near your focal.

Okay, thanks for the tips.

 

[GamerPaladin332]

I like. very Nice.

 

[Cool Dog]

Sweet! I wouldn't use it as my signature tho ^^