v1 - 7/10
v2 - 5/10
Yeah, it is kind of all over the place. >_<
I believe there are too many colors, i like the render as it is clear and looks good, would be interesting to see your next.
the fonts nice, the render kinda suites the pic, its just the focal point and i dnt get why the side of the kirby is blurred when the brush next to it isnt, but yh it looks fkin awesome for third sig, i sucked up to my ... still do =/
Okay, I'll try to keep the next one more basic with colours then.

