Motto Remix Sample

[x llama i]

Im not claiming to be the best, please just accept the fact that I enjoy rapping and I'm working to improve on it, I do have a job that's not music so I am not some useless bum lol, with that said, i'd appreciate any positive comments or constructive criticism. (sorry about the quality had to use a RB Mic L.)


http://soundcloud.com/joshua-lofink...M2_PytWDtwBLqWMuXIxn4OjNLbjDvfZX0gVBgXXqQ#_=_

 

[Chase]

Not too bad actually. Check me out, I have a thread on this subforum.

 

[Promethazine]

You've got nice lyrics, I'd try to clean up the flow a little bit though. It sounded a bit patchy in some places, but other than that I thought it was pretty good.