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Mixed feelings

w000t

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Something seems right and something doesn't.
 
I'm no professional, but my opinion is that she's totally in the center of the frame. And that goes for depth too, not sure if I'm understandable here...

Take a look at her hair on the top of her head, it's noticeably behind that light, and the rest of her body is behind it as well. I'd say the revelation of her shoulder along with moving that top light behind her head would somehow fix this. My two cents.
 
I'm no professional, but my opinion is that she's totally in the center of the frame. And that goes for depth too, not sure if I'm understandable here...

Take a look at her hair on the top of her head, it's noticeably behind that light, and the rest of her body is behind it as well. I'd say the revelation of her shoulder along with moving that top light behind her head would somehow fix this. My two cents.

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