Merry Christmas [Feedback Welcomed]

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Merry Christmas [Feedback Welcomed]
  1. Unread #1 - Dec 16, 2013 at 10:51 PM
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    Merry Christmas [Feedback Welcomed]

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    tell me what you think.
     
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  3. Unread #2 - Dec 17, 2013 at 1:29 AM
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    Its nice and christmasy. :3

    I think you should try use up the rest of the red space if possible tho. Detailed snowflakes might look nice. Or presents ... or a tree.

    I kind of find it awkward how the top of the sack disappears, as well as her leg. Although I suppose it could be snow blowing- but the snow around her leg is pretty red so I think that's whats throwing me.

    How much of it did you make?
     
  5. Unread #3 - Dec 17, 2013 at 1:58 AM
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    I'm not a big fan of anime but it is a nice piece and nicely done. Also does got a nice Christmas vibe to it.
     
  7. Unread #4 - Dec 17, 2013 at 3:32 AM
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    I don't like how plain the outside (red) is or how the blending going inward is, kind of just blotchy if you know what I mean.
     
  9. Unread #5 - Dec 17, 2013 at 10:32 AM
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    Black borders around it, comon man, that's the least you can do when asking for cnc here :p
     
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    Christmas is spelled with a capital C :3
    jks, looks nice!
     
  13. Unread #7 - Dec 17, 2013 at 12:17 PM
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    You could of entered it in the SOTM for a shot at a 80m pot prize, who knows, you could of won.
     
  15. Unread #8 - Dec 17, 2013 at 1:18 PM
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    The smudging is really good. Unlike some of the others the simplicity and composition of the piece makes me really like it. You should remove those black borders though ;)
     
  17. Unread #9 - Dec 17, 2013 at 3:53 PM
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    Thanks guys.

    Also, I have a habit of putting black boarders around everything...Guess it's not really appropriate for a smudge piece.
     
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    Still could.
     
  21. Unread #11 - Dec 18, 2013 at 5:52 PM
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    Merry Christmas [Feedback Welcomed]

    Tbh, i dont like borders so im not a good person to give you feedback (im not a tag person)

    But, concerning the text, you should chose another font.

    Continue :)
     
  23. Unread #12 - Sep 28, 2018 at 11:16 AM
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    BUMP, still welcoming feedback!!
     
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    Nice tag. The "christmas" font and the stroke effect does not fit imo. Also bg and render needs more work on lighting/sourcing and shading
     
  27. Unread #14 - Oct 1, 2018 at 5:41 AM
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    I think some of the red space on the right should be occupied to make the red balanced on both sides.

    It looks nice for what it is though, however, I don't know much.
     
  29. Unread #15 - Oct 1, 2018 at 2:35 PM
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    This has nothing to do with feedback and I'm unsure as to why you posted. Stop trying to get your post count up with bullshit ass posts. I asked for feedback because I still need it. You don't stop needing feedback at any point in your journey regardless of where you currently are in that particular journey. I ask next time you post it's either feedback or just shut up. Thanks my man.
     
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    The reason that he said this is because the post was 5 years old.
    I believe reviving a post longer than three months old is gravedigginga and against the rules.
    Don't quote me on it though.
    Also, you'd be the one who revived the post and that's why the comment was made.
     
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    I came back after a ban and bumped my own post. So what? If it's against the rules than simply report the post and go about your day. I'm not sure why spending energy and time posting pointless shit will benefit anyone. BUT that's just me. Again, feedback is just feedback at the end of the day.
     
  35. Unread #18 - Oct 2, 2018 at 3:39 PM
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    You need to chill out.

    I was telling you the answer to your previous question of wondering why that person made the 5 year comment.

    You're a very angry person in this forum, for no reason at all.
     
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    Did you draw it yourself? If so, really good job! I feel like you could work a little bit more on the brightness and contrast because it looks kind of dull rn imo
     
  39. Unread #20 - Feb 27, 2019 at 11:04 PM
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    if rate with numbers will be 6/10 < brightness and contrast and font >
     
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