I personally like it .
I like the feel to it (like um her face has a oil paintesh thing, btw, did you use corel painter?).
The blood doesn't really 'fit in' to this, maybe lower the sateration (I think thats what's its called..).
Overall, good job .
Well I made a James Dean one similar to it but lowered the vibrancy of the blood, didn't look half as good. Also the brush strokes are just the "Angled Stroke" filter on photoshop with a few tweaks to the settings.