Made an AD

[Felix]

Never really made RSPS AD banners in the past but idk first attempt let me know what you think

if you like what you see be sure to check out my shop

 

I love the concept, but the execution doesn't do it for me. Also it doesn't really serve as a great advertisement, because after seeing this I wouldn't go check out the server.

 

[Dream bot]

Personally I think its a good banner, great job felix.

 

[Swaze]

Looks good, but it doesn't look like an advertising banner to me. KIU.

 

[Silver]

I like the banner but nothing really stands out for me to click on the advertisement and check it out.

 

[Thor]

A little too sharp edges, else it looks great.
Doesn't remind me of an advertisment banner though.

 

Its not really an advertisement banner since we re not tempted to click on it. However, if we talk about the Design, I find it nice All you have to do is add something to convert it to an ad that customers want to click.

 

[DrunknHigh]

Nice good job for someone who never really made one.

 

[Jesse6]

Looks cool, but if you're advertising for a server add something that would make someone click the advertisement.

 

[Gold Swapper]

Keep it up

 

[IAMKarmo]

Sweet idea, like Darkest mentionned however there is a bit of a lack of execution. Too sharp/edgy/pixelized, lighting seems to be a bit too inconsistent if in terms of intensity and direction with the curved design of the whole word. 7/10 for me, a lot of potential but a couple of things need to be fixed/worked on.

 

[ContrastX]

It's cool to be fair

 

[ziemassvetki]

just awfull... colors doesnt look good... might aswell paint the whole picture red

 

[whaatitdo]

Pretty good. I would recommend fixes in the white coloring and having more detail quality all around, not just some of banner.

 

[oldrunepker]

Its pretty good, just yeah not super grabby to my eyes.

 

[xPhilip]

Wow that's clean, one of the best RSPS logos I've seen

 

Lack of anti aliasing and over saturation/sharpening along with a lack of it inspiring any desire to click makes the delivery severely lacking. Not a fan of the lightroom used either, looks rushed and the effect on the text isn't that good. Generally speaking you can't go wrong with more lights. Think about the real world, sure there is the main light sources in the sun and lights etc but everything in the environment reflects light. In c4d text typically there is literally only the text in the project so more lights need to be introduced at reduced intensity.

 

[Tyler]

Fix the lighting and sharpness and you might have a decent piece there.

 

[Amnezia]

its not bad m8

 

[squidge]

the oversharpening makes it look oldschool. thats good

from an artistic perspective its good and fairly original.

as for its design as an advertisement i would personally click on it if i was looking for a clan or something but obviously your target audience (people posting in this thread) are saying they wouldn't click on it so you should definitely change it.