Is the iTevion a font looking like that or did you get the font and transform it? Nevertheless it looks alright with the clipping mask of space texture. The subtext of his email looks out of place however next to the fancy text. Typography can make or break a piece and in this case I think it's broken it. A text with a bit of bounce like the main iTevion would look better and if it were a darker shade to match the blue in iTevion.

