Life story Rap

[Grafix]

I just came out my moms vagina im tryna get some air how come all these people fucking stare? you never saw a black baby with rabbies and no time to care if im ever gonna see them agian.


3 years old and im told not to be bad but i hit the teacher when im mad and they said i have to use hooked on phonics so i go crazy and stick my head down the toliet.


. 8 years old im cold cause the air condtion is on to high so i smoke and fly and i found out santa is really a homeless man that rides a beatup 1990 cheverolet.

12 years old i cooked my dad his fav dinner for father day but he never showed up but 2 days later he came and ate that shit cause i put it in the fridgerator i spit in it and he said "oh shit you so bad"

. 13 years long no acutally its small cause my penis is the length of my balls

. 14 my mom took me to the movies and she didnt pay for my ticket so i beat her senseless but i found out later that she wasnt my mom she was my girlfriends mom.



thanks it took me a long time to do this rap and i hope you like it.



The end

 

[impetius]

I just came out my moms vagina im tryna get some air how come all these people fucking stare? you never saw a black baby with rabbies and no time to care if im ever gonna see them agian.


3 years old and im told not to be bad but i hit the teacher when im mad and they said i have to use hooked on phonics so i go crazy and stick my head down the toliet.


. 8 years old im cold cause the air condtion is on to high so i smoke and fly and i found out santa is really a homeless man that rides a beatup 1990 cheverolet.

12 years old i cooked my dad his fav dinner for father day but he never showed up but 2 days later he came and ate that shit cause i put it in the fridgerator i spit in it and he said "oh shit you so bad"

. 13 years long no acutally its small cause my penis is the length of my balls

. 14 my mom took me to the movies and she didnt pay for my ticket so i beat her senseless but i found out later that she wasnt my mom she was my girlfriends mom.



thanks it took me a long time to do this rap and i hope you like it.



The end

lol'd

 

[bumberclart]

lmaoo pretty good rap

 

[Zak_rs2]

err kool lol :laugh:

 

[TheNextBestThing]

Ehhh failure. ><

 

[Arya]

I didn't like it.

 

[TJ]

anyone can write words down i suppose.

It was terrible. When i think of rap, i think of it going together..this one didn't at all.

 

[Magic Arrow]

That was horrible. It seemed you were trying to look more like a mockery than a rap artist. Your lines had no flow. All in all it sounded horrible.

 

[I Sell I]

Try putting the lines under eachother where it rhymes.
If you do this, your flow should be easier to follow to.

As for now, and as stated before, it's horrible.

 

[G0d_]

oh gawd, is this fer realz?

hayell naw.