Lerrikal - Rapping

[IlikeCake]

This is one of my mates with one of his new songs, he's trying to get better so creative criticism is welcome

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zb9gclx_GfY

This isnt me so post any feedback on the video!

 

[R3COV3RY]

Wont lie, he sounds like he's too fat and tired to rap.

Just saying, not trying to be mean.

 

[kamhawy]

nice veiw

 

[Dragoon142]

na nah ! fuck that ! listen to mac miller !