Learning How To Make Beats, Any Feedback?

[brainwash1997]

Veiled

The most recent one I've been working on for a bit. I know it sounds really weird and most people won't like it. But any feedback would be appreciated.

 

[norfwest]

Some cool sounds and rhythm here ... I suggest making it less choppy, as it's somewhat grating.

 

[Klassifide]

Sounds pretty dope, reckon you could try alternating some intense sounds to come in from right to left in the mix.