Layout V2

[BlakaGFX]

Fixed everything but the examples backgrounds.
Cnc

 

[SmokeHut]

Some parts of the background render look really low res, but looks decent overall.

 

[bigk1121]

it is cut off at the bottom. also just take out the examples! just put them below your layout separately. put your terms and conditions in there or something.
EDIT: also the light rays should shine over the examples.

 

[Thor]

I think it's better than v1, but you could try to add some detail to the cyan stroke on the boxes.

 

The chains look a little low res along with some of the render but overall good changes and good job taking the criticism and improving your work based on that.

 

[Matty ICE]

This looks great, well designed and put together.

One recommendation I would have is removing the background in your examples and making them transparent