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I haven't made a tag in a while, so I attempted this:



It's not my best tag, but I'm trying to recover my skill (which isn't much, honestly).
I tried some different stuff here. There is a cloud on the bottom, some clipping masks, a thing at the top right (lol), and tried to create a good flow. Could I get some honest C&C here (I don't care if it sucks, say so)?

 

To be honest
there is no flow, just a couple of splotches on the right and a few on the left ontop of a render. focus is not defined and no depth is placed in the sig.

try making the splotches flow with the sig, you can set placeholders for flow with c4d's and work along with that.

also, if the color is so bad that you have to turn it black and white, then you should immediately scrap the sig.

 

I told you most of this on MSN.

Border is really annoying, b&w is bland and boring, font is horribad and you're an animefag. You need to quit using subtext on everything.

That^

 

I find it sexy, the render goes well with what you've done on the left. I just feel it's a bit long and feels a bit stretched, not sure why.

EDIT, said the wrong side. Lol.

 

I tried to make it flow, but I guess I failed. What do you mean by placeholders? Some people appreciate black and white (like tr1bal I think) and it's not a negative thing. Some people would rather turn a nice colored sig into black and white. Thanks for the honest feedback.

Border - ok
B&W - Read above
font - I found it good
Animefag - lol stfu
Subtext - I find that it makes it look better
thx for the feedback jake

Oh thanks a lot. .
I Don't know about long & stretched, but I guess everybody has a different perspective of things.



Thanks a lot for the feedback guys, trying to get back in to Graphics.