C'n'C.
+J (tag)
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C'n'C.
My eyes are getting drawn to the streak of light to the left of her head. The stock is defying the flow you set with the c4d/stock:/
Not your best mate KIU
Not your best mate KIU
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Like the lighting, actually, don't really like the J+, but it's a neat way of incorporating it. The "radial pattern" or whatever it might be, might look a little better at lower opacity in the center bottom, by the patch of skin [arm?].
I like it
I like it
It's ok, but you can improve a few things that will make it look way better
1. the streak of light mention by w000t, it draws to much attention, i agree on that
2. the dark markings on the left ( the +J ) on the sig is useless to be honest
.. you could remove that, doesn't look good
3. if i look closely i see some VERY cool effects, but the entire sig is to blurry and flat, has no depth at all.. try to create more depth.
4. the render is a floating head .. why can't i see more of her body, i just see her head and shoulder, it makes it look weird ..
those are the things I'd improve on this sig, then it will look allot better, I'm sure
KIU
1. the streak of light mention by w000t, it draws to much attention, i agree on that
2. the dark markings on the left ( the +J ) on the sig is useless to be honest
.. you could remove that, doesn't look good3. if i look closely i see some VERY cool effects, but the entire sig is to blurry and flat, has no depth at all.. try to create more depth.
4. the render is a floating head
.. why can't i see more of her body, i just see her head and shoulder, it makes it look weird ..those are the things I'd improve on this sig, then it will look allot better, I'm sure
KIU
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