It's called, "3rd Period".

[Arya]

Read it emotionless-ly. (That way, you find the right rhythm.)

Blind is this false sense of hope,
A withered dream that would not show.
But on the other side of it,
A forgotten love that could not grow.
Either way,
On either path,
Inevitably,
I'll lose the game.
Preparing these garments,
Lies and truths,
The cloaks of which should hide my shame.

 

[johnty15]

its good. write another and post pls

 

[cain121]

Liked it. Id rate it a 6/10

 

[JIM TIM JOHN]

It was okay.. Pretty average stuff. 5.5/10.

On second though, I really like

Preparing these garments,
Lies and truths,
The cloaks of which should hide my shame.

so 7/10.

 

[jdwk 7]

I would rate it probably a 6/10.


P.S. Was the reference to "THE GAME", intentional?

 

[loving_spec]

not bad. i like more rhyming though

 

[basudec1509]

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its really nice post....


i just liked it....


thanks....