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I love the manip on this, though the texture underneath the hand slightly brings it down. Focal point of lips is nice, not liking the bright little short line on the top left, bring the brightness down on that, and colours are lovely.

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Nice use of wireframe with the sprite, nice concept and composition, light source is nice and defined, dark blue/purple should be more of a turquoise/cyan, but nice nonetheless, one of your best sigs.

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Flow's nice on this, but the c4d is too blatant and all in all a bit too monotone, nice composition and focal placement nonetheless, but looking at your other sigs, this looks a little underdone.

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I know it's a manip, and it's a nice manip, i just really don't like the placement, since it makes your eyes jitter all over the signature. flow's slightly chaotic, since the gaze of the skeleton/woman is perpendicular to the upwards flow.

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This is a really nice sig, nice composition, lighting, focal placement and effects, depth could be improved, but that's all i see wrong with it.

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Again with your manips, it's nice, but i don't like the composition or the overall execution. The manipulation blends well, but the flow is confusing because of the motion blur/horizontal light bar of his fingers, and the corner. The concept is nice, but more effects/time spent on lighting/colour could be better.

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Quite a nice signature, nice composition, colouring could be better, not liking the random yellow light coming from in between his legs. Nice letterforms in the background, or whatever they are.

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Not really liking the flow, composition's alright, colouring's quite nice, maybe too bright a little?

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Nice vert, the focal point's nice, colour's nice, and overall a really nice tag. One of my favourites from yours.

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nice vector, don't like the colouring/typography though, doesn't compliment very well, the colours are a bit random, and just used because of high chromas, try start off with a few set colours to base it on.

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Colouring's really nice in this one, the colours compliment well and the flow's nice. Nice transparency tag (:

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slightly too pixelated and sharp on some edges, nice colours and composition though.

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Slightly basic composition and sig, nice style and everything though, the downside is you can't see what you've done to the tag, though i'm guessing it's a lot (judging from your other manips).

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Probably my favourite, definitely one of, but nice compo, nice colours and flow, nice depth, nice focal, lighting could be better (light in some places is verging on shadows, killing some of the realism), but still, lovely tag.

CBF for rest xD
 
Thats what I call crit thanks for taking your time to comment bro really appreciate it, and I completely agree about the black and white manip I was going for something simple and the concept was there but my placement was a tad off, and with the simple manip (skull) I really just messed with the colours and added flames as well as the chains you see blurred in the front just to work on my depth. Overall thanks for crit =)
 
Those are epic :o Did you take classes involving this stuff or is it all self-taught / internet peers advice/inspiration. [if that makes any sense xD]
 
Beautiful work :D .. your name sounds familiar .. think i remember your name from PR .. .. but yea,, nice work bro
 
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