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kk this is a song I wrote, i want your opinion on what you think it means, your interpretation of the song so far ive heard like 5 diff opinions on what it could mean.

uninterested is the name of the song



I think im tired
I want to sleep
find me a way
I need to dream


i am okay
im not okay
i am okay
im not okay


I stay up late
its time to play
Tell me the way
give me a break


i think im tired
i want to sleep
its worth the pay
i need to dream


im not okay
i am okay
im not okay
i am okay


i stay up late
its time play
im not you
im not me

i think im tired
i want to sleep
my minds a stray
i need to dream

i am okay
im not okay
i am okay
im not okay

i stay up late
its time to play
i know everything
i know nothing

i think im tired
i want to sleep
erase the gray
i need to dream



i dont want to sleep SLEEP!!!
i dont want to sleep SLEEP!!!
i dont want to sleep SLEEP!!!
i want to sleep CREEP!!!
i dont want to sleep SLEEP!!!
i dont want to sleep SLEEP!!!
i dont want to sleep SLEEP!!!
 
Looks like the meaning is a guy that's pretty fucking high, and he's has his good trips and bad ones. When he thinks he knows everything he is having a good trip and when he knows nothing he is just so mellowed out he doesn't care.
And when you repeat, I am okay, Im not okay. That's just him freaking out in his own mind whether what's happening to him should be normal.

That's my interpretation of the song :)
 
thanks and yea when i wrote it it was about getting high but not in a trip way its just about the whole mind set man my views on life you should check out my drawings there stoner drawings look at them and think :D there pretty cool and yea
and mm im high atm chillin with my dogs and i am okay :D

taylor von zombie guys :D

JOSH HER NAN DAZZZZZ

xD
there awesomee e

but yea thanks :SD
 
I'm not trying to be harsh, but I'm gonna be brutally honest here.
These lyrics suck.
It really seems like you were just tripping out and describing it.
 
If you actually make a video or mp3 file and sing it, i wonder how it will sound
 
MegaMatt said:
I'm not trying to be harsh, but I'm gonna be brutally honest here.
These lyrics suck.
It really seems like you were just tripping out and describing it.
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I completely agree. D:

They have no meaning whatsoever.
 
JIM TIM JOHN said:
I completely agree. D:

They have no meaning whatsoever.
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you have no creativity the meaning isnt soupossed to be bland and the lyrics dont suck when i can write 1 song and have people come up with more then 4 diffrenet meanings for it, you just dont understand it thats why i labeled it as if you like nirvana read cause any nirvana fan would understand what an interpretation.

just because you didnt find meaning in it doesnt mean there isnt one :D


look at casey he tottally found a meaning to it
 
Unerth said:
you have no creativity the meaning isnt soupossed to be bland and the lyrics dont suck when i can write 1 song and have people come up with more then 4 diffrenet meanings for it, you just dont understand it thats why i labeled it as if you like nirvana read cause any nirvana fan would understand what an interpretation.

just because you didnt find meaning in it doesnt mean there isnt one :D


look at casey he tottally found a meaning to it
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Nobody wants to hear a song about being high. They at the least want to hear a song about tripping and the beauty of it. Listen to some Beatles songs like Strawberry Fields Forever and Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds and you'll see what I mean.

Your lyrics are vague. But they are too vague.
 
JIM TIM JOHN said:
Nobody wants to hear a song about being high. They at the least want to hear a song about tripping and the beauty of it. Listen to some Beatles songs like Strawberry Fields Forever and Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds and you'll see what I mean.

Your lyrics are vague. But they are too vague.
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Listen man, this song is not about tripping first of all ive never tripped
dont get me wrong, id love to do acid and ect... just dont know where to get it yet, but yes the beatles did make songs that could be interpreted better than this one but STILL IM NOT THE BEATLES im some random kid on the internet, try using some closer to the same level

like comparing me to green day
a band that sucks ass. my opinion
and im some random kid
where on the same level sorta
when you compare this to any of there songs
its like wow this is actually pretty good
its like comparing the best grape to the best sex
not gonnna work out to well..

get my point?
 
Unerth said:
Listen man, this song is not about tripping first of all ive never tripped
dont get me wrong, id love to do acid and ect... just dont know where to get it yet, but yes the beatles did make songs that could be interpreted better than this one but STILL IM NOT THE BEATLES im some random kid on the internet, try using some closer to the same level

like comparing me to green day
a band that sucks ass. my opinion
and im some random kid
where on the same level sorta
when you compare this to any of there songs
its like wow this is actually pretty good
its like comparing the best grape to the best sex
not gonnna work out to well..

get my point?
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You remind me of myself when you said you would like to try acid, etc... but you don't know where to get them. I had the same problem...

And even though I can totally understand where your coming from with the lyrics, they are a bit vague. Maybe try changing some of the words up or replacing them with new/better ones? Just a suggestion [=
 
Unerth said:
kk this is a song I wrote, i want your opinion on what you think it means, your interpretation of the song so far ive heard like 5 diff opinions on what it could mean.

uninterested is the name of the song



I think im tired
I want to sleep
find me a way
I need to dream


i am okay
im not okay
i am okay
im not okay


I stay up late
its time to play
Tell me the way
give me a break


i think im tired
i want to sleep
its worth the pay
i need to dream


im not okay
i am okay
im not okay
i am okay


i stay up late
its time play
im not you
im not me

i think im tired
i want to sleep
my minds a stray
i need to dream

i am okay
im not okay
i am okay
im not okay

i stay up late
its time to play
i know everything
i know nothing

i think im tired
i want to sleep
erase the gray
i need to dream



i dont want to sleep SLEEP!!!
i dont want to sleep SLEEP!!!
i dont want to sleep SLEEP!!!
i want to sleep CREEP!!!
i dont want to sleep SLEEP!!!
i dont want to sleep SLEEP!!!
i dont want to sleep SLEEP!!!
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Dude that is horrible, it's short, extremely vague, Little to no meaning, and I could just keep going on.

that is a complete insult to Nirvana, and you comparing yourself to any band lol like even greenday , greenday are gods compared to this. I am sorry if this hurts your feelings but I'm being 100% honest.

No one likes short worded repetitive songs, give some meaning help tell the way you're feeling etc.
 
Unerth said:
Listen man, this song is not about tripping first of all ive never tripped
dont get me wrong, id love to do acid and ect... just dont know where to get it yet, but yes the beatles did make songs that could be interpreted better than this one but STILL IM NOT THE BEATLES im some random kid on the internet, try using some closer to the same level
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I didn't compare you to the Beatles--I said you should listen to their music and take some pointers from them. You need more specific lyrics with less about emotions and more about real things with a little about emotion mixed in.
 
No dude it isn't inspired by Nirvana, the only thing I can possibly see is he failed to try to make the lyrics go with the same beat as smells like teen spirit, but that doesn't even fit. This song I did a while back is inspired by Nirvana.

When I was young, I felt alive
the world always had a surprise
But I grew up, and realized
life is sad and full of lies

I hate the way you make me feel
wounded broken my Achilles heel
I know the way you want me to feel
my hope is gone the pain is real

I had my love, I held her tight
I kissed her lips every night
But like all things, it slipped away
and like my joy, our love will fade

I hate the way you make me feel
wounded, broken, my Achilles heel
I know the way you want me to feel
my hope is gone the pain is real

so now it comes to what I know
that love is fake it rips a hole
it doesn't stop consumes your soul
till nothings left that is it's goal

I hate the way you make me feel
wounded, broken, my Achilles heel
I know the way you want me to feel
my hope is gone the pain is real
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