I do music so heres a rap

Never to be undone im not self centered
Im a new version your just rendered (an image that was edited)
Controlling the minds of the teens with this microphone
Id die before the pretense of the preferred steal my home (someone outcasted)
Im not anything but a new persona to a face of blatancy
You all think your hardcore? but you aint makin-me
The destruction of the world will collapse onto us all
But the angels in heaven will never fall

Destruction of a governments idealistic ideals
The world presumes just because i rap i steal
Just because i was raised in a broken ghetto home
i was ment to be a fuck up but i stand alone
i will make my people proud
i will be remembered one day
i will make my people shout
Let there pain fade to gray
Never to be outdone because i never competed
I was broken before but with this mic. im completed
never to be broken never to feel pain
Im nothing but energetic im so insane
My membrains full of this cronic but ive never smoked
The mind of a pothead but the soul of a ghost...



FREESTYLE BY HMNI ON SYTHE WOOWOOOO

 

Here's my freestyle,

I make it rain
I make it rain
I make it rain
I make it rain
I make it rain
I make it rain
I make it rain
I make it rain
I make it rain
I make it rain

It pours.

 

Broke his ass.
I really don't like/can't rap, so I can't critique it.

 

meh i dont like radio station rap at all, anyone youve heard of is bullshit in my opinion just because its all sex, drugs, bitchs, and money...

 

Tunes Analysis?

As punishment...


I'd chime in with a "Haven't you people ever heard of closing a goddamn door?!"
No, it's much better to face these kinds of things with a sense of poise and rationality.
I'd chime in, "Haven't you people ever heard of closing a goddamn door?!"
No, it's much better to face these kinds of things with a sense of...

 

You rap is better than 90% of the crap (rap) that people listen to these days. Good job

 

I'll be rappin'
I'll be cappin'
I'll be happen..
ing
ping
ding
ring!

See I'm down!

 

I make it rain on these hoes. Amili

 

K, my crap *cough*rap*cough* beats you all.

got my gun
praying for tha saint
I like to chew on gum
oh baby your a charm
I like to color paint
I'd like to feel your arm
I like shredded wheat
I like shredded
I love mice
Shut up shredded
I don't like rice
Except for the white rice
Don't touch my rice
My rice
shall we meat
Wheat
Shredded wheat
Shreddeded wheat
Shredded
Shreddeded
Shreddeded
molesteded
Shreddeded
Shreddededed
ok MICE!
Never fuck with my wheat
Or rice
My rice
Please please please please please
OH OH OH

oh yeah pro rapper in town ladies

 

I hate rappers.. rock ftw

 

very poetic =]

 

now get a beat and rap it

 

Yo, yo, yo, yo.
Yo, yo, yo, yo.
This is mah shit (mah shit, mah shit).
Yeah, yeah.
Yo, yo.
Shit, mah shit.

bam, bam.



^ Do you honor me?

 

Interesting. I'd like to hear it recorded.

You gotta think of some better material than talking about chronic though. That's been dead and done.