how is my rap sound

Its alright but I could do better

 

Yea, its like walking into a rap studio and saying. My name is Ted Smith! I mean... Make up a name that represents your opression and what you've gone through. So if you had a hard life i would just go by T westwood.

 

Aight, I'ma be honest, I've never hit a blunt in my life,
But I think I could smoke that verse, so I'ma make an exception tonight
You talk about hardcore nigga's like you know one, man you're a joke
Shit, now I know what a troll looks like in a chain and a fur coat
I got some tips to be a gangsta, but listen man the truth hurts,
Just go find some bloods and walk by 'em in a blue shirt
It's been that long since you had a good verse, you don't know what one looks like,
And judging by those red cheeks, I'd say your mum still kisses you good night.
You're addicted to Sythe so bad you get banned and vade to get back in,
Don't come back as a rapper, I don't wanna see that shit again.

 

I have no choice but to treat Ryan like anotha one o six n park contestant,
spittin' the weak verse tryin' to test the water, but only found out that it
was shark infested. Yeah, you the kid that tryin' to come here and test my
pride like I ain't gonna come inside and test your ride, it ain't even parked outside.
This is not your everyday freestyle battle, its dark outside. Face the facts, you
just a white boy trying to promote fake verses that you call Ryan's freestyle
tracks. Dont come here and test me before you get ran over, leaving your back
with huge train-tracks. You mention BK? I heard they murder things. Only time
you seen beef is when you go to burger king. You imagine me in a blue shirt?
man thats a myth like unicorns, at least I dont like seein' grown men in tight
uniforms. Im freestylin when Im kickin it, so ridiculous, put yourself in a bad
predicament. By the way, my lil sister has somethin to say, "There is no way
you will beat my brother on freestyle friday."

 

Honestly, I hate this kind of rap.
Dude I'm a badass shit like that.

No offense to you.
You might be a great guy, I don't know.

But I hate this hard ass rap.
Not just from you, Lil wayne too.

I like rappers that are real.
Lupe, Cudi, etc. etc.

They are themselves.
Gangster rap has to go.

 

Fail copy and paste from Jin.

 

Yea. Lil tim?

 

Lmao is this kid trollin?
I don't know if he's serious or not...

 

It's pretty good, consider using less profanities.