I can definitely see improvement across the work, well done.
My personal favourite is Ed Sheeran's thread. I can see that you're beginning to become more content-aware and using a smoother and more consistent palette.
A point to consider - it's important to tweak drop shadows and outer glows so that they are the right distance away from the text/objects and the right opacity and colour; you are by no means limited to a standard black 100% opaque shadow!
Also consider borders around flat backgrounds. For example, a 2-3mm white/grey border around the Ed Sheeran thread with a slight shadow would help separate it from the Sythe colours and make it look less sudden (and almost chaotic).
Good work so far though. I really appreciate seeing a keen and budding new artist in the making!
Great work pal, can defiantly see an improvement in your work from start to finish. Not sure if you have already but maybe try some 3D stuff?
I'm not any pro in GFX or anything but I don't like the outter glow/shadow outside of all text. Text can be nice and clean aswell![]()
I really appreciate all the feedback, I'm fairly confident with PS using it through school and university but just decided to give this ago with a different style, loving playing around.
Also can't wait for my Wacom to arrive![]()
I am amazed to even consider this being your first project with a graphics tablet! For me, the outline is a little obvious and a little to thin around the hair. Try using the "Round blunt medium stiff" brush for the outline at a relevant thickness and almost practising where your hand will be moving before eventually pressing down each time you make the stroke. It'll help, trust me!
All of these don't seem hard to do but they look cool tho
MUCH MUCH MUCH better! I love the internal border and I'm glad to see you're learning to use the perspective tool to add light/a platform under the characters. Keep up the good work!!

