Horror

[caseyscoolerthanu]

Can you smell the bodies burning

Flesh and blood my stomachs turning

Death to all on crucifix

Take me to my endless bliss

Killing all just for fun

The frightened creatures try to run

Death to all the little kitties

Chop them into itty bitties

Horror stories come to life

Infections from a rusty knife

This cringing pain is so surreal

It questions all I know is real

All I see is blood and rain

End this nightmare soothe my pain

As I wait for nearing death

I lay upon my bed of rest

Death draws near his face obscene

And says to me it's all a dream.








Please rate 1-10. Thank you

 

[caseyscoolerthanu]

Anyone even gonna read this shit?

 

[JIM TIM JOHN]

I read it.

What is it about, other than just people dying? Is there a deeper meaning?

Also, please reply to my thread too!

 

[caseyscoolerthanu]

It's pretty much about a guy having a really fucked up dream, that's what it was based on.

 

[JIM TIM JOHN]

It's pretty much about a guy having a really fucked up dream, that's what it was based on.

Ah. I see. That's pretty much what it seems like. This would make a good screamo/emo/demonic type song.

 

[DZ666cob]

Pretty good but on the part

"This cringing pain is so surreal

It questions all I know is real "

Seems like you're trying too hard just an idea but I'd change it from that to

"This cringing pain is so surreal

it questions all I know and feel"

 

[caseyscoolerthanu]

Thanks for the advice, but i wouldn't change that lyric, i like it the way it is.

 

[HaroldTyler123]

Vampire Cat:
Glistening fangs and gleaming claws,
Teeth that pierce and jaws like saws,
Its blood red eyes that pierce the moon,
My fate is awaiting it will be here soon.





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