Guitar Riff I made recently

[ccaveman]

I have recently made a new guitar riff on the E minor Pentatonic Scale for a possible song for my band. In the beginning of the recording, I played some notes to act as a metronome, so you can ignore those. Also, I recorded both guitar parts for this riff, so it is actually two guitars playing at once. I would like it if everyone could give me feedback and hopefully give constructive criticism on what I could change or help in the riff. Thanks for your time.

Here is the link with my guitar riff:
http://www.loudio.com/Music/Rock/Guitar-Riff-for-a-Possible-Song.169335

 

[deadzone]

you shouldn't just change the tunings and play one of the riffs from anata (exactly) and try to call it your own.

 

[ccaveman]

First of all, I don't know the band Anata and I've never heard of them. If I did make a riff exactly like theirs, it was coincidence. Could you please direct me to the riff/song I allegedly copied.

 

[xxmaulerxx]

sounds good man good for you

 

[mage3158]

It was alright, although I don't really like that type of music.

 

[ccaveman]

Thanks for the feedback

deadzone - I would like if you could tell me which song that it sounds like. Thanks

 

[deadzone]

I don't have the name of the song (my music is ripped from my ipod so it has that letter catalog bs , but anyways the band is --- Anata, and the album is Dreams of death and dismay, An the riff is within the first 20-30 seconds of the song.

 

[ccaveman]

Was the song "God of Death?" If it was, I didn't copy that song, or any song. It may have a different style, but I still haven't heard exactly what you are talking about.

 

[deadzone]

Was the song "God of Death?" If it was, I didn't copy that song, or any song. It may have a different style, but I still haven't heard exactly what you are talking about.

I can't recall, I will do some research sometime tonight, and find the song my music on my computer is a mess, and my Ipod is fucked atm (need to reformat) So I will have to re-download the whole album to find out. I would know the song But I havent listened to them in a very long time.

 

[ccaveman]

Ok, thanks.

 

[xxthebeastxx]

Pentatonic scale ftw, nice m8. I love scales

 

[ccaveman]

Thanks for the feedback.

 

[trusted angel]

not bad not bad at all, but the sound quality isnt that good though

 

[ccaveman]

Yeah, I recorded with a computer mic near my amp, so it wasn't professional or anything. Thanks for the feedback.

 

[Mr_Scripttester]

I have recently made a new guitar riff on the E minor Pentatonic Scale for a possible song for my band. In the beginning of the recording, I played some notes to act as a metronome, so you can ignore those. Also, I recorded both guitar parts for this riff, so it is actually two guitars playing at once. I would like it if everyone could give me feedback and hopefully give constructive criticism on what I could change or help in the riff. Thanks for your time.

Here is the link with my guitar riff:
http://www.loudio.com/Music/Rock/Guitar-Riff-for-a-Possible-Song.169335

You know there are only so many riffs that can be produced. Almost every single one you hear now adays sounds just like another, it can not be helped.

 

[ccaveman]

Yeah, that's exactly what happened.

 

[Whereswaldo]

make that song and post it, 14 seconds of ownage tbh?

 

[rs nechryeal]

sounds nice. id like to hear the final product

 

[ccaveman]

I don't know about it. My band hasn't really tried that song, but I'll keep sticking it in their minds to try to create this song.

 

[Evon]

pretty cool, can i have the tab?
if so send it here:
[email protected]