On a more positive note...
I like the fact you've added colour to the image, but i don't think there was no need to add every colour of the rainbow to it.
I like the whole style, fashion of the image
Maybe you should try keeping it to 1 or 2, 3 colours max with the spiraling effect you got going on.
Background could do with some work, but the colour works well, just add some texture to it.
And make the image larger and more crisp!