I like it. I've not had any experience with C4D but I like how the letters aren't all uniform, have been purposefully altered. Just creates a nice personalized touch imo.
Really liking the crispness on the text. Putting the red on the face and the black on the border of the text probably would have made it a little more readable. All in all it looks good.
Like said above, it looks nice but I can't read what it says.
I have no experience with GFX, but it looks like the text is falling deep into the background, which makes it un-readable.