Gold selling layout [Second attempt][For sale]

Criticize please . Willing to sell, offer below!

 

looks better then the first one

 

Thanks man<3

 

no problem

 

Some of the elements look LQ, and there really is no cohesion or overall theme. The effects kind of look like you just randomly placed them to fill negative space. I also think you need to work on your materials on your text and your lighting set up because the materials look dull and the light is cast weirdly onto the object.

 

Thanks for feedback.

 

In my opinion it just seems like a lot of random stuff thrown together, I only say that because the text I the left draw you I the left, the text at the top draws you to the centre and the text on the right just hangs there. Just feels like it needs a general theme to bring together

 

Looks great, if I had a selling thread i'd use it.

 

I think it looks really good.

 

Thanks guys, will sharpen it up when I'm home from school .

 

This thread is not for commenting on how it looks, it's for buying the layout. Any further posts saying "nice work it looks good" will be infracted.