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Gift, but C&C is appreciated.
 
Of course, your artwork is amazing :)

I think this is really nice! Wish I could get one :p
 
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Visually, I'm not sure about the eyes, she looks like a split-eyed Husky or a Cat.

Technically speaking now, you need to work a bit more on defining the focal and isolating it... lighting is always a large contributing factor to this.
Something to fill the empty and negative space on the top left and right is a must... some kind of background, it's too plain.
You're also relying on just the stock itself to create depth... you've just placed a few c4d's, clipping masks, and stocks on top.... not really signature making.
 
Of course, your artwork is amazing :)

I think this is really nice! Wish I could get one :p

Thanls.

Visually, I'm not sure about the eyes, she looks like a split-eyed Husky or a Cat.

Technically speaking now, you need to work a bit more on defining the focal and isolating it... lighting is always a large contributing factor to this.
Something to fill the empty and negative space on the top left and right is a must... some kind of background, it's too plain.
You're also relying on just the stock itself to create depth... you've just placed a few c4d's, clipping masks, and stocks on top.... not really signature making.

Haha, yeah I changed part of her to a differen't hue, I thought it would be a cool effect (and the hair). Why would I isolate the focal? I think that would be plain dumb just leaving it all alone and creating a background. I get how lighting helps it. I thought about that, but the text kinda made me think that it was alright.
Some kind of background, hmmm... I'll see.
Not to argue, but define signature? I mean, what else can you do? I used pen tooling, I used a 1 px brush to create the multicolored effect (and smudged it), I added a gradient map, space stock, and loads of more stuff. Really...
But it wasn't my best signature, and I could of added more stuff to it, but I wanted to keep it simple/effective.
Thanks, though.

Looks mad dude, wouldn't mind a Gift like that myself ^.^

EDIT: Oh forgot about this one.
Thanks. :)
 
Where did you get that stock? I am having a hard time finding good human stocks lately.

Also, I like it. The left side is a little blah, but otherwise it is the sex.
 
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