Freestyle Rap

Quick freestyle. Emotions at my heart, I have a baby daughter thats due in october. stress is building


My life is full of promises and broken and dreams
I'm hopin things will pick up but it seems there are no job openings
Growing up I must of not gave God enough offerings
Or maybe my angel took me off her wings
So I dream music, The melody in my head is theoretic
Yea im white but my words sweet enough to murder diabetics
Genetics Altered by skin color to be rejected
I died and like christ in 3 days i resurected


Im hungry all the time pain is all i find
Fuck my music imma lose it, I dont wanna rhyme
I think I lost my mind I think I Lossed my shine
Go Ahead And Hate on me bitch that aint a loss of mine

Cus Im the sinner-In hell Setting beside Jesabelle
I scratched the 12 and heaven fell every time that i've reconsiled
so ill be dead or left in jail before I be the next 2 fail
Cus other kats dont measure well like ounces on a metric scale

If you want the truth I died years ago Im livin out my last breath
Like a zombie with no soul in his chest
So Heres the rest I solemly swear ill forever stay raw
so if u lovin pac im the savior that yall pray for

So bow ya head-Cus im the next to EX (x) the game
So much passion in my rhymes ya could say i sex tha brain


You see I aint here 2 bring it back im livin to show u how a liar and a theif
can be the truth-in the eyes of ya own belief
Cus life is full of deceit, It's everyday wake up to repeat
if you cant take the burn stay away from the heat

I swim beside the sharks see I got bigger fish 2 fry
dont matter if i live or die its the only option i got to try



Cus I had an angels birth intertwined with an ancient curse
If ya wanna live ya better vacant earth wait let me get naked first!
Born a Premmy like an awakened curse
Everything my whole life been techtonic like an Shakened earth

Dieing is easy but livin with satans gonna be hard
But afterall in his playground-I stand in my yard
It's not the hand u was dealt its how u play the Damn cards

spit agaist the earth till his reality is reversed
so when he spits his best verse it comes out as his worst
so life begins with a hearse and ends with a birth
so everything he hates he loves untill it hurts

 

YO WATCH OUT
im black
il shot u in the back
dang girl thats a nice rack
smack

 

so ill be dead or left in jail before I be the next 2 fail
Cus other kats dont measure well like ounces on a metric scale

Great line there, loved it.

 

How can you freestlye online without a beat?

 

This was written too a beat. This would better be described as ''key-style'' or free thought....

 

it's very biblical/spiritual wouldn't really call it a free style unless ur a preacher

 

A B C D E F G
SOMEONE SHOULD OF TOLD YOU NOT TO FUCK WITH ME.....
you think you can rhyme man? your flow is amateur
im a nerd i can smoke you with my iambic pendameter
mess with homeboy, dont wanna risk it
ill set you alight like cooking a biscuit,

you're flow is faded and dated,
deflated and constipated if i had to rate it,
hate it translated you ate it,
hey kesmo you've been graded,
chewed up swallow and deficated,
to re-instate it on the dvd this wont be pixelated,
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add me on msn: [email protected]

 

@i am magical

you're pathetic attempt for what you call rap.
was what keeps you off the streets and keeps you rhyming on your Mac.
homeboy i've never been one to play but if your going to start go ahead and make my day. Your freestyle is another reminder of what rap has become.
you and your illegal mom struggle to support 16 sons.
what the hell are you doing quoting 8 mile with your biscuit-risk it bull shit.
You better bring a chair to a fight because in the end i'll be like "kid, sit"
what are you doing reciting the alphabet? i'll make you say abc, 123 while your begging on your knees. so fuck pixels fuck magic man this aint no fucking circus whats with the magician. So sit down look up and it's time for recognition.

 

pretty good

 

thanks

 

I don't think it was that biblical.

 

Ho I'm the boss
Get on yo' knees, open your mouth, forget the floss
Save every last drop like A1 Sauce

 

Boss of the game huh, Well I'll start tossin' your brain!
This aint a salad bar- But I serve in a line the way im bossin the game

 

There's already a thread for this.
http://www.sythe.org/showthread.php?t=336079