For a friend

So, I made this for a friend. I hate the text and I'm generally not pleased with it. Comments+criticisim please?

 

[krophator]

the quality looks really bad :s or too oversharpened cant really tell.

 

[w000t]

I like it but i don't like the text :S overall 7/10

Ps the person looks like a drag queen

 

[Spraynwipe]

Little sharp, and yeah text is eh. No real complaints besides that

 

Yeah I way oversharpened the focal :embar:

 

[Draggoon]

I think you should lower the text's opacity and blur out her body except the hair/face so you can see the um.. 'twinkles' better lol.

 

[So Industrial]

low quality and has pretty much too much exposure

 

[Kiabin]

As said, the focal is over sharpened. I would add blurring to the left side. Basically where your burned it. It would add depth.

 

[roberto15]

6/10 not horrible but not amazing

 

[Blackkk]

I wouldn't say the facial is as much 'too sharpened'. I think the colors go together really good but the big glare in the center doesn't go great with the shadowing to the right. I'd keep the shadowing just not as much.

Nice job though If I had to rate it, it'd be about an 8.