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Follow Me
  1. Unread #1 - Mar 4, 2009 at 10:13 PM
  2. Hello my name is
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    This is a poem/hip hop song ~its a hip hop song, but it can flow like a poem aswell



    Now the shadows override the circuts of haters
    Starting shit with nay sayers, while creating craters
    Touch me and youll disinigrate, like lava in layers
    Peeled like a onion, tears shed with no prayers
    But follow me my children to the place called heaven
    where we listen to HU and Blink 182 24-7
    Never do we sleep, because theres no need to rest
    We will go to hip hop heaven, that is our final test

    Now collect your belongings and hold my hand
    I will pull you down below, through 10 feet of sand
    We will take a journey down into the inner core
    We will see who has talent, While we get warm
    The devil sits and watch's us, with a evil grin
    We talk about doing bids, and committing sins
    Im not religious, actually im a agonistic mind
    I just fall in love with fire, and put it out with time
    Because I, Will not follow myself, i follow the black
    I race down hallways and give old people heart attacks
    Not because im "skilled" or a gangster at all
    Just because im fucking retarded, and i trip down the hall
    I slipped and fell, and got back up and did it again
    Im fucking stupid follow me to special ed



    ~hahahaha get it? if not, you dont get wordplay, or topicals to well
    ill explain it (its a semistory)


    First it talks about going to hip hop heaven *where we can listen to our music as much as we want, and noone cares* then you find out heaven is hell because living is a heaven of sorts, then i state im not sure if i believe but i love the mind of the devil and i would overpower him, i dont consider myself a leader and then i follow bad people who do bad things, and i used the old people and tripping as a metaphor for mistakes ive made and called the whole thing retarded :D

    so basically, unless you really liked the words, i wasted your time, because it had no meaning ~Btw this was a keystyle *no editing*
     
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