Flyer - Club Night

[SmokeHut]

Rate, Hate?

Constructive criticism is welcomed

Any pointers to make this look better for a Club Night Flyer?

 

[DMR]

I suggest making the text a tad bigger or at least the title bigger.

 

[SmokeHut]

This is just the basic information they wanted me to put on it. They will be adding the information for the night themselves. That's why I have left room for it.

Any other suggestions?

 

[Ashaxx]

The Image of the girl lacks quality in my opinion. Perhaps try to find a HQ picture to go in the middle. Also title needs to be a bit bigger, especially "Spensleys Emporium".

Other than that looks good buddy Keep it up!

 

[SmokeHut]

I agree with the image, but again I'm working with what I've been given.. This is the image they supplied.. Nightmare I tried duplicating the layer and sharpening the shit out of one and burring the other, then overlaying the blurred image to get this *much better quality than the original they requested.

I will discuss whether changing the render image will satisfy them as the current one isn't quite to standard.

Thanks for your view

 

[Evilbobman]

Most of the text should be redone. The top text should be bigger, and the border on it looks bad. Try a nice white/whiteish grey, and a little bit better font (new font optional).

If those are logos, you should consider putting them closer together, and the ethics one looks way out of place.

The background is a little cheesy, but if they like it, they like it I suppose. Personally, i would look at a couple of flyers too see what looks good for future projects.

The movie-style borders on the top and bottom should be about the same length imo, but I'm a stickler for symmetry on those kinds of things lol




Well, that's all I could think of. Don't have to change everything because of what I say, but that's just what I noticed.

 

[SmokeHut]

Thanks for your response Evil - I agree with you on the borders and logos. These will be changed, as for 'ethics' that's the name of the event/night that's why its up there. Perhaps it needs enlarging and a better font.

Thanks for your input

 

[Evilbobman]

Did you make the little logo thing for the Ethics thing?

 

[Issra]

Definitely erase the effects on the face

 

[SmokeHut]

Did you make the little logo thing for the Ethics thing?

I certainly did.

Definitely erase the effects on the face

The effect of the white lines crossing or the eyes? Or both?

 

[Evilbobman]

Wanna send me the psd for the poster? I have a few things I want to try on it :3