I think this one is a bit better than the Syndra one, Please give me some advice on how i can improve or just some ideas that I work on. Thanks
Once again I must basically repeat what THERSGOD said, try not to make a box around the text, for me that looks really bad (the box around the text) otherwise it's pretty good. Oh and also, the text has no light effects, and is kind of off to one side and really dark, try to make it stand out.
Quite a good start. The text is pretty alright but you should texture it, work some on the shadows, and get rid of the inner glow. The render is good as well, but it doesn't blend well into anything else - the wind effect you put doesn't help and it has a slapped-on feel. The place you need to improve most though, is the background. It's effectively some random texture with some random lights with some random brushes. None of it contributes to the overall piece and it seems to just be there in order to have a background - and in that case better no backgroudn at all. Look around on DeviantArt for sigs and take a good look at how the background is done. Try to emulate that and do your best to get the render to fit in with it as well as you can.
I really like it for beginners! However, I really think if you could get rid of the inner glow completely and maybe add a slight blue outer glow it would look really good.
