Well, in my opinion, its bland.
Makuhita isnt visible enough and fades with the background.
The effect look good - might need to be a bit more random.
The font is alright, positionings thoughtful but looks out of place without a proper foreground.
Colors blend in alot, giving it a some-what 3 minute job look.
Im kind of not really good with photoshop terms and usually just play around with things, so I'm sorry I cant give proper CnC.
Ask TDD on mIRC for some CnC, he is extremely good at GFX.
if ($_POST['GFX'] == religion)
{
echo TDD is my GOD
}