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First smudge eva bb

Jiwi

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Started with nothing and ended up with this. The composition seems off since there isn't a whole lot to it, but any further criticism would be much appreciated :)

Thanks!
 
Wow, that's really impressive for a first time smudge tag. I think the way you applied the smudge brush is great and fitting, but I get the feeling there's some conflicting flow around the front of his torso and a bit below. Also as you mentioned, there is lack of composition, I always find it better to start with a smaller canvas. Overall awesome job Jiwi :)
 
Really good for firrst smudge the blending seems a bit off though and that smudge on his hair looks weird could use a little more depth but nice one!
 
I love smudging but smudging alone is hardly ever effective. Try mixing it in with your usual style and it should bring many benefits.
 
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