First signature - Criticism needed

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First signature - Criticism needed
  1. Unread #1 - Jul 7, 2013 at 5:13 AM
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    My first attempt at making a signature in 5 years. It's nothing amazing, just something I made. I don't really like it but it'l do the job​
     
  3. Unread #2 - Jul 7, 2013 at 7:58 AM
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    I think its quite good man. Could do better if you cut off the excess background and instead added some sort of shadow to your text. Other than that, its good for a first signature.
     
  5. Unread #3 - Jul 7, 2013 at 9:55 AM
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    In my opinion, its better having the background transparent on sythe :p personally, i dont like when theres "borders"

    For the first signature, its good man but dont do so much of shadow behind your text. Replace it with some cool effects to your text :)
    I love the font you used :D

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  7. Unread #4 - Jul 7, 2013 at 3:57 PM
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    Thanks for your feedback guys, yeah I was thinking of making the background transparent. I too like the font, kind of gives me an image of like fruit ninja haha
     
  9. Unread #5 - Jul 8, 2013 at 12:32 AM
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    well with that addatude you wont get better. an if you thank it looks bad why would every one els want to look at it.
     
  11. Unread #6 - Jul 9, 2013 at 6:42 AM
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    Have a positive attitude toward your works buddy. The quality overall could be hugely improved if you saved the image as a JPEG or PNG. The only time you would really ever want to save an image as a .GIF is when you have animation.
     
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    I don't like the text what so ever, it would look a lot better if you made the text 3D. Also i'm not crazy about the font either.
     
  17. Unread #9 - Dec 20, 2013 at 10:23 AM
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    i reckon it would look better if you just cropped the words out alone and get rid of the background :p
     
  19. Unread #10 - Dec 20, 2013 at 3:46 PM
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    square/box signatures doesnt look good =/
     
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    Guys this was a fucking gravedig, op is from 7-7
     
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    damn lmfao, gravedig bandwagon
     
  25. Unread #13 - Dec 24, 2013 at 9:08 PM
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    well its very basic, ill give you that ;)
     
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