First Sig in about a year.

[Justin.]

Like it? Hate it? post here. Cnc would be very good also. im open to what anyone has to say.

Thanks.

Made with no C4d's no Fracs no nothing. just messin around with some sponge, dodge, smudge, etc.

 

[Zygomatic]

Try adding the render layer on it multiple times (ctrl + j) multiple times then smudging the last one and mess with the blending options. Sometimes you can get a good outcome.

The blur on her face takes away from the render itself. We want to be able to see her face. The blur and smudge isn't the best.

Try using this smudge tutorial it helps alooottt.
http://sigresource.com/index.php?showtopic=19663
It's what I always refer too for help.

7/10 for not doing shoop for a while =]
Check out my thread 2 threads under you too =]

 

[Justin.]

Thanks for the criticism mate. although, i may add, i only sponged and dodged her face. i may have smudge a little too close. and that's why maybe it looks like i smudged her face. which i would never do cause she's gorgeous. lol

and thanks for the tut buddy.

 

[Zygomatic]

No problem.. It just looks wierd where it goes from blur to normal hair near her neck. It doesn't blend well with it. Good font though.

 

[Diax]

It's a bit to plain, the render is stuffed up and I don't really like the text =/
But I do like the lightning.
Other than that, 6/10

 

[+DI-Jerry]

the colours dont exactly work together that well
and the smudging isnt all tht good, but since u were away for a year i'd say gj =]