first sig ever!

[poopy2177]

haha jk but C&C please



:nuts:

 

[I need trainer23]

Looks dope. I think it could have been better if it was just a tad bit brighter

 

[poopy2177]

ok thanks for the comment

 

[Alteranz]

Rounded Edges - No
Drop Shadow - No
Scan Lines - No

Size of the signature should be bigger. You've over-sharpened the whole piece as well - use it with a little more control next time.

 

[T R 1 B A L]

Alteranz is completely correct, scan lines used extenseively ruin the depth. Colours are alright, focal placement isn't great, rounded corners+compo could be farrrrrrr better.

 

[Fro]

Though, you can use scan lines effectively... just have to play w/ blending and opacity.

Looks ok ^^^what they said mostly, that text placement upsets me..But you can only improve

 

[poopy2177]

ty for the feedback