First Pixels.

[The Dark]

Constructive only please.

 

[Jord4nPdeBest]

i dont get it, what did you do?

did you create those letters?

 

[The Dark]

i dont get it, what did you do?

did you create those letters?

I did it all..

 

[bizcuits21]

I like the concept, but the background you created is to sudden in the change of color, try making more colors or squiggles. I also like how you created a shadow, but try putting it under the spots where you shaded.

 

[The Dark]

I like the concept, but the background you created is to sudden in the change of color, try making more colors or squiggles. I also like how you created a shadow, but try putting it under the spots where you shaded.

The background does not flow much at all, but I was not really aiming for that. And what do you mean but the shadow? You confused me

 

[Leo.]

wow, my first pixels were REALY bad lmao......really good if this is your first

 

[Jord4nPdeBest]

oo very cool. my only CC would be to fix the K..it looks a little gibbled.

other then that you could work on the background-although i know you didn't give 100% on it from your previous post, and could of made it better.

good job

 

[bizcuits21]

The shadow I am talking about is under all your letters.

 

[riipped]

Decent concept. This is good for starters. Next time try a more simple text. It looks like you got a little carried away trying to make the text look cool, that it turned out a little odd and out of proportion. Also next time work on shading effects. The more shading you do the better the pixels will look.

 

[Solid tank]

Did you follow Riipped's guide for this?

 

[hampe-92]

I think it is realy good for your first, my first i tried looked like shit xD so i gave up