First Graphic in a While...

[Danai]

Just finished my first graphic in a long time on photoshop. Opinions?

All CnC Welcome ​

 

[Wrote_Murder]

To blurry, I don't like how "n" and "a" are the same color.

4/10, fix those, 6/10.

 

[Kinaesthic]

The N is most likely more orange then the A.
Yet, this is a pretty nice piece, it's very simple! Yet the lighting looks kinda good.
Good job.

 

[Danai]

Thanks! I can't fix the color as i only saved the finished piece, and I merged a lot of layers before then, but the n was meant to be violet and the a was meant to be pink xD

 

[skipjack]

It would be difficult to read this from a distance. It's very blurry. Try playing around with the unsharpen mask tool in Photoshop and see what kind of results you get.

 

[BGlave]

Don't like the reflection, cut a little less than half of the top so it makes it look realistic.

It's very blurry, which a name signature shouldn't be. At least without a concept.

 

[surj]

you shouldn't follow a tutorial word for word, its pointless.

Regardless, it looks pretty good apart from the quality.

 

It looks nice, however you shouldn't have the whole piece for a good reflection effect. Just the first third of it should suffice.

 

[Noam]

^^^ And when you blur it for that particular effect, have an unblurred layer at the top to sharpen it and make sure it's legible