First digital portrait

[jeffoman]

this is my first digital portrait ive done. I already see alot of errors and alot of things that need work. The hair for example. But in total i think this was about 5 hours of work.

 

[TheCoon]

Bit too much blur on the right hand side of things, random line there too XD.

The style you got going on between the hair and the face is contrasting. You got the smooth, soft face and then very straight defined hair.

 

[Designer Graphics]

not bad at all. just need to work with the shading and details such as hair, bread, eyelashes, skin to make it more realistic.

 

[jeffoman]

I need a good tutorial on hair. I have no idea to really get it down pat.

 

[Thor]

Try adding some shadow drop to the hair, and that random line at the right.
And his shoulders are too blurry.
All in all its quite good, and i couldn't do it better.
Good work

 

[ZippyGFX]

I need a good tutorial on hair. I have no idea to really get it down pat.

This really helped me out when I was trying to learn to do hair.
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Easy-HAIR-tutorial-305673851

 

The shading isn't bad at all for your first try.

A little heavy on the blur, but seriously, solid attempt.